angichan, April 29th, 2011, 12:49 am
yep, inking suits of armor - and working with PERSPECTIVE and LIGHTING!
but this page was well worth is<3
thank you to creativedemi64 for the rim lighting-ness-ness-ness
kuroi_hitsuji, April 29th, 2011, 5:46 am
- Your lighting seems a bit improper...I feel odd critiquing it, but I can't help it.
Most time when such a lighting occurs, cross hatching isn't common for the gradation between the light and shadow...it's usually smooth.
On top of that, the sparkle lines go across the shadow of the backrgound so it doesn't look like "light" it looks like an odd-shaped shadow.
I see what you're trying to do, a sparkle effect, but it would be more effective if you just gave tiny sparkles throughout the lighted area.
JUST AN OPINION...but it's ultimately your decision.
I like the scratchy use for the background shading, but not for the gradation.
number1animemangaluver, April 29th, 2011, 8:21 am
- Oh, heck no it's not empty, boy! Look closer! There's a person by the suits of armor!
angichan, April 29th, 2011, 10:35 am
kuroi_ hitsuji - Thank you so much dear!
I actually did NOT want it to be sparkly ;^^
so I will have to go back in and try the lighting again with some time and careful thought....
I really like how you're playing with the lighting.
KeiLovesYou, April 29th, 2011, 11:58 am
- Yeah, empty. EXCEPT FOR THAT MAN STANDING THERE!!
raven2007, April 29th, 2011, 12:33 pm
omg omg omg - *squeals* its the guy from the poster!!!!!!!!!!
omg Dani watch out that is if you have to watch out but yay
angichan, April 30th, 2011, 12:52 pm
fixed? - played with the lighting a bit in the last panel, look better?
Pietje (Guest), May 2nd, 2011, 4:07 am
- Wow the lighting seems alot better now.
KeiLovesYou, May 3rd, 2011, 9:25 am
- I agree, the lighting is loads better. I like.